Lily Luna Potter

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I BEEN ROAMIN' AROUND ,

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always lookin' down at all i see
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PAINTED FACES FILL ,

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the spaces i can't reach
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[/B] Lily Luna Potter

NICKNAMES: Lils

AGE: 15

D.O.B.: September 2005

HOUSE & YEAR: Gryffindor 5th year

PROFESSION:

WAND TYPE: willow 9 and a half with piece of unicorn hair

SEXUALITY: female

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YOU KNOW THAT I ,

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could use somebody
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[/B]red

EYE COLOUR:brown

HEIGHT: around 5’3

WEIGHT: 110

BODY TYPE: small, but muscular

DISTINGUISHING FEATURES: her red hair

PERSONAL STYLE: Lily is a lot like her mother and is a little like her name sake Luna in she has her own style.

PLAY BY: Emma Roberts

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AND ALL YOU KNOW ,

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and how you speak
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[/B] 10+
-owls
-thunderstorms
-small animals
-quidditch
- hanging with friends
- roses
- her family
- boys
- falling in love
- the forest
- reading
-writing

CHARACTER DISLIKES: 10+
- bugs
-slytherins
- snakes
- being alone
-the dark
- being scared
- loosing people she loves
- ignorance
- nasty smells, like vomit for example
- cheaters

GOALS: one or two
- to be as good in qudditch as her parents
-to be the best person she can be, better than her brothers of course.

BOGGART: (GREATEST FEAR)
- loosing her family

PATRONUS: form it takes & (BEST MEMORY)
- hearing stories of her grandmother

DEMENTOR: (WORST MEMORY)
- falling off her broom and no one being there to help

AMORENTIA: FAVOURITE SMELLS (MAX. 4)
-flowers
- the outdoors
-perfume
- food

BASIC PERSONALITY: Lily has a lot of the personality traits of her mother. She is nerdy, but a little girlish as well. She loves quidditch and has the win attitude of her father. Lily also loves danger and has that sense as well.

Lily knows when to think things through, but also when to go with her gut. She is a quick thinker on her feet and very intelligent. Lily also knows how to fight for herself. Having two older brothers she knows how to defend what she wants.

Lily, on the other side is a sweet, passionate girl. She loves to dress up and be all girly, when she is not on the quidditch field. She is loyal and will never back down to a challenge. Lily is a fun person to hang out with and shares her happiness with everyone around her.

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COUNTLESS LOVERS ,

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[/B] Harry James Potter

MOTHER: Ginny Weasly

BROTHER(S): James and Albus

SISTER(S): none

OTHER: cousin Hugo

BLOOD STATUS: Halfblood

HOMETOWN: London, England

PETS: a mouse named scabbers for her uncle Ron

BIOGRAPHY: Lily Luna Potter was born to Harry and Ginny Potter. She is the youngest and only daughter of the two. She has a good relationship with her parents and loves being with them, but wanted to go to Hogwarts more. When her brothers went, like her mother she was very jealous, but soon got her chance.

Lily was a very bright child and student through her years at Hogwarts. She was close to her cousin Rose in intelligence and had her parent’s skill on the quidditch field. She was seeker like both of them for the Gryffindor team. She has made them very proud.

Now at the age of 15 she has had a few love interests and has gone through different changes, but has not hindered from her family. She has become a very pretty young woman and has developed her father’s sense for danger. No one at Hogwarts is surprised. Lily is hoping to have a fantastic fifth year there, and hoping for some change.

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I HOPE IT'S GONNA MAKE ,

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you notice someone like me,
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[/B] Pam

RP EXPERIENCE: 5 years plus

HOW YOU FOUND US: proboards support

OTHER CHARACTERS: twilight characters, Lily Potter, Ginny Weasly, other non cannon characters.

RP SAMPLE:

Lily walked slowly down the hallway. It was dark and she was alone. Two things she thoroughly disliked. It was almost midnight and she was coming off from studying late in the library after quidditch practice. It had been a hard night, and her whole body knew it. Lily was sore all over, but in a way still satisfied.

Slowly making her way up the stairs, Lily thought of her warm bed. How she was going to plop right down in it and go to sleep. Approaching the fat lady, she spoke the password and stepped into the Gryffindor common room. Out of the corner of her eye she saw a girl sitting in one of the arm chairs, crying softly. She knew her, but hadn't talked to her much. She felt bad. Instinctively, Lily went over. "Are you alright?" She asked, putting her hand on the girls shoulder to comfort her.

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OFF IN THE NIGHT ,

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[* caitlin]

So, there are some things that need fixed before your application can be accepted. First of all, the image you posted stretched the board, so I deleted it. Make sure you resize the image to make sure that it's around 400 by 200, or so. And fill in the part of the application where it says character's full name.

Now, on a more serious note.. You have posted the bare minimum for Lily's personality. That is the most important part of the application process. I want to see more about who she is, especially since she's a rather important canon. You need to seriously expand on the personality and do a better job of modeling her as an overall person.

Also, the history is pretty vague. It could be more detailed, but it isn't terrible. Since she is such an important canon, perhaps expand it a bit more to emphasize how she fits into the family and such. You could also include her first signs of magic, or something along those lines.

The other main problem is the roleplay sample. We have a minimum word count of 300 words. Your sample is about half of that. Every single post by our members must be at least 300 words, so you'll need a new sample.

I am sorry, but there are a few problems that definitely need worked out. Feel free to work on them and let me know once you have fixed them. I encourage you to keep trying! We would love to see you as a member on the site, but your application definitely needs work. Thank you so much for your time!